Free Download Forbidden Passion - by Jodie Sloan

  • Title: Forbidden Passion
  • Author: Jodie Sloan
  • ISBN: 9781503185616
  • Page: 210
  • Format: Paperback

  • Free Download Forbidden Passion - by Jodie Sloan - Forbidden Passion, Forbidden Passion Tom Langley Sharpe III is a teenager who probably has it all He is an only child in a wealthy family that owns a ranch that trains race horses When he was still a teenager he discovered that he had a
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    Omg, where to start Crappy writing Yes Logical Mistakes Definitively Entering a third name in a two guys relationship sex scene Priceless I read a couple of scenes than one time because I thought I must have read it wrong Is his horse a mare or a stallion

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    School is finally over and Tom is ready to start learning the daily operations of the ranch and getting closer to his family and the horses He s always been friends with his father s hired hand, Daniel, but now he can add intense attraction to the mix He doesn t know how Daniel would take it if he professed his feelings so he lives in agony hoping things will progress in the future Daniel has always been gay, but he thinks Tom as a girlfriend hidden out there somewhere He can t tell Tom how he f [...]

    This dull story is wrongly titled there are no shifters I skimmed after getting bored but what I read needs serious editing The wrong things are capitalized and contain apostrophes where they don t belong For example, a pair of pants are called Jean s but in the next sentence they are jeans Some proper names are not capitalized nor are some sentence beginnings Friends also gets a wrongly placed apostrophe Hang is written for hung Dom is written for down Oh, and one of the boys has a hymen, which [...]

    So, the beginning wasn t so bad and obviously the author has enthusiasm, but this story just fell apart Also, the part where Daniel calls Tom master was weird to me, given that this is a contemporary story.I also checked put the blurbs for the next parts and have to say, view spoiler that a menage including a female character isn t in my opinion a gay romance hide spoiler

    Umm someone needs spell checkOk the premise for the book is good but the continuity was horrible At one point the characters name changed f poo m Tom to Mike, didn t anyone proof read this book Hope the next book is better.

    A sexy story with a good cast of characters and a good storyline to be continued.The loss of Thomas and Pricilla takes us into the next book which I will be looking forward to.

    Not really recommendable

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